TMM43's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[| - Digital Sunshine - |]

voted 4

Humm. Well now, you seem to have a pretty good techno piece on your hands! I'm really liking the feel of this song. It's short, but it's good. I can be a bit repetative, so when you make the full piece, fix that. Another thing was that the lead seemed to be in the 'build-up' stage the whole time. It never sounded like it was an actual lead per say...
Please don't take this as me bashing your work, I'm only giving you constructive criticism!
Nice work with this. Keep it up. I'll be keeping an eye out for the full version!

DJ-TroKis responds:

Preciate it =) Don't worry, I take everything as constructive criticism! You're not bashing, you're pointing out flaws and that's always important to me. Thanks for the review! I'd say keep an eye out for the full version, but apparently you already are ;P Peace

[Axel F [House Remix]]

voted 4

I can't tell you how many Axel F renditions I've heard, so 8 for originality.
The synths and everything you used were pretty cool, although they were very FL sounding. xD
Nice work with the remix of this song. Keep up the good work!

PS: Check out my latest song WorkDay

Logini responds:

Holy crap! you reviewed my song within literally the two minutes i uploaded it to Newgrounds! :O :O :O That means you couldn't even have listened to the whole song yet.... XD Sure I'll check out your new song.

[Treasure These Moments]

voted 4

Haha, I was singing while I was listening to this. xD

This song reminds me a lot of 28 Days Later for some reason. I think the melody sounds kinda like it.
This is a really good song. Nice job with this!

PS Check out some of my stuff!

pitbulljones responds:

cheers for the review. A friend of mine keeps saying the same thing, it sounds like 28 days later. I cross referenced and it sounds nothing like it. But maybe it's cos the guitar decends as does 28days. I must have been influenced somewhere down the line but i aint seen that film in about a year or so. oh well. thanks for the review, i'll bob over when i get some free time. but i will bob over/

pitters

[JAG~TheCaveRave(FF1_ReMix)]

voted 4

This is a pretty good rave song you've got on your hands!
I'm not a big FF1 fan, and I don't know if there's a cave or what ever in the game. To me, this really didn't feel like a 'cave rave'. It felt more like just a regular rave! xD
Nice job keeping up with the theme of rave.
I like the transitions from the melody and what not to the beat and build up! Nice touch.
I really enjoyed this song. Keep up the great work.

beatmasterJAG responds:

Thanks for the vote!

The title was random, last minute right before rendering lol

The M1D1 track from FF1 is called cave1 so thats why the title popped in my head...figured it was better then JAG~FF1Cave1Song :p

[{GBD} Below the Atmosphere]

voted 4

OHHH, now this is a creepy piece! The background noises really added to the eeriness of this song! I'm liking it.
Everything seemed to flow pretty well, not real complaints from that. The transition from the beginning to the middle part seemed a little sudden and some parts seemed a little muffled, but nothing bad.
Nice work with this song. Keep up the great work!

DoobyTimePiece responds:

thank yee! i got 0 bomed and it sucked but im not liven it down. i had a 4.22 but eater way. thanx for the review tmm43 ill try maken them better and better.

[Tone Reflected]

um

There's nothing playing?

Re-submit.

NeoMarine responds:

I downloaded it to test... it does work, nothing wrong with this upload probably just your computer, or connection.

[Taking On Tomorrow]

voted 5

WOW! This song reminds me a lot of something RageVI would make! Thats a good thing! XD

Well, this song is beautifully composed. I really like pretty much everything about this. I'm not too sure about the bass though. It's kinda weird coming through my speakers.
Really amazing job with this!
10/10
5/5
+ Downloaded.

PS Check out my newest song WorkDay!

Twistedtechnology responds:

LOL i JUST got done with the last review and yours pops up XD Thats so cool ^^

Anywho, im not exactly sure what you mean with the bass,but i'll take your word for it XD You bet i'll stop by and check out your newest XD

Thanks for the review!

[Silent Happyness]

voted 4

well now. This song, is, how should I put this. Different.
It sounds like you were just messing around in what ever program you're using. It doesn't seem to have too much structure. It's really random.
You have a couple parts in there that sound like you were getting off to something, but then it drops out into something different.
Fix this song so it sounds more appealing to the ear.
PLEASE don't take this as me bashing you, because I'm not.
I'm only helping by constructive criticism.
-[TMM43]
PS Check out my newest song WorkDay!

Staxitix responds:

Yeah, as I told the first reviewer, this is just awfully random and terrible sounding the more I listen to it. I feel bad for puttng it on here.

[Karco -- Aurora --]

voted 5

Humm. This was an 'in your face' type piece. There wasn't 'beginning' more of a SURPRISE! Kinda scared me. xD
The song is really good. I'm loving your drums, your synths, and your leads. They all seem to come together really beautifully! You did an amazing job panning the lead and synths in and out.
After listening to the whole song, I realized that the reason why the beginning was so 'in your face' was because this LOOPS! I'm surprised by that. I usually don't hear long loops like this. Great job with that.

I would like to say I'm sorry if this review isn't all that good. I usually write better ones. The past week I've just been overloaded at work, so late at night is the only time I have to write reviews now.
I promise I will review another one of your songs in more detail. Promise.

Again, GREAT song, keep up your great work!

Karco responds:

Ha, well, I was planning to go for a show-offy intro of what I've figured out how to do, but I was lazy. :D

Actually, there was no panning in this song... :O

It loops? I'm not so sure about that, it wasn't supposed to. But if you like it, sure. :P

And don't think your review's not so good. When you submit a song, watch its score get zeroed, get one download and no reviews for three days, anything'll do. :D

Thanks for the review, TMM43! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

[Spawn - Zelda Remix]

voted 5

HAHA! There you go, you've just made a great song! Sure it could use some tweaking, but many of my songs could as well. I really like the eeriness of this song, it really adds to the sound effects used all throughout the song. The tempo changes were a bit sudden at times, but nothing too bad. I think you should turn this into a techno track, sure sounds like you were going to when I started to hear the beat come in, but nothing... :(
This song is a bit repetitious. The melody should change every so often to spice things up!
You're getting better at making music! Keep it up, because it's starting to show!

If you want people to notice you more, post your new songs in the Audio Forums under the "Audio Advertisements" Thread. People do look at it!

Again, nice job man!

spawn28 responds:

Yea'h man, Thanks alot, I think I might just totally change it up a bit, add some drums, and shit...