voted 4
OK. There are some changes here. Not any incredibly noticeable ones. Although the song is good, I feel like you could have done a lot more.
The piano is what I like most about this song. You could make it into its own song, without the intro to it. I think it would be pretty good.
Other than that, I think you should stop messing around with this song and work on a new one.
I don't want to seem harsh, I'm trying to help you. If you keep working on the same song over and over, you're going to come accustom to making music the same way, and possibly not progress as a musician.
Overall nice work. I would like to see more out of you though.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)