voted 4
Seems like you are getting better!
Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Always look at the bright side to things, and keep your head up. You're going to get people that are going to say your music isn't good, but if only one person likes you're songs, that's still enough to continue to strive and make music.
This song isn't bad! It's short, so no 5. It's a little slow paced for my tastes, but thats alright.
I would choose a different pad though, the one you have it too fat. It kinda drowns out everything around it.
The song is overall good.
Keep up the good work, and keep your head up. :)
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my song "Ride on me"!