errrmm
Well, it seems you have a rather...well...different piece on your hands here. Not a bad thing!
I do like the ambient sounds, they are quite peaceful, yet you almost ruin them by drowning them out by the loud drums! turn the volume on the drums down a little...
Drums. Humm. The drum work is quite good! I do like the beat, but this type of drum beat does not go with this kind of song. The drums are too fast, too loud and seem to be very out of place throughout the whole song. If you maybe had some slower, and softer drums in the back, then you could truly make this piece great.
Please don't take any of this as an offense, it's just constructive criticism. =)
4/5
7/10
-[TMM43]