voted 5
This isn't a bad song, but you could fine tune it a little to make it better.
The kick is to generic. You HAVE to get something besides the FL standard kick, it would make this song SOO much better.
The rest of the song really isn't that bad. You just have a couple of standard FL sounds that shouldn't be there. The crash, for example, you need a different one.
The overall melody and composition of this song is great though! Don't get me wrong. I'm a fan of it.
Keep up the good work! you're doing a great job.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)