voted 4
Well, for your second piece, this isn't too bad. The guitar and the beat are a little off, but that's ok. The guitar at times seems to stutter...but that can be fixed.
I would work on making the bass and beat try to fit with your guitar, because that's the main sound in this piece.
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Voted 4
Well, the melody in the background was WAY to soft. The kick was off, and the synth melody was too high.
I can tell you're new to audio. So for someone who is new to audio, this isn't bad! So don't feel down about this review (If I made you feel down...I'm sorry, I'm only here to help).
Make those adjustments, and this song will be much better!
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voted 5
Hurm. This song really reminded me of some sorta cave rave! Kinda like the matrix. haha
Well, this was a rather eerie piece, and I like it. Nice job with the progression. The melody doesn't come in too strong or too loud. Really good job with that (that's pretty hard to do, at least for me it is). I'm really liking this song. Keep up the good work.
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Eerie is good! And now that I think of it... the arping/drum patterns do remind me of the Zion rave in The Matrix. Thanks for the review.
Voted 4
This is one of my most favorite songs. You did an alright job. The strings in the back were right on.
A few things...The guitar is a little distorted and echoes a little much. Then you get to the part where the guitar is completely out of whack (Off the notes). Then you have the over powering bass come in, which is also distorted. Work on those things, and this song will be a great re-make.
PLEASE don't take this as bashing you, because it's not. I'm here to help! =D
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um...
how is this downloaded 15,664 times, never been used in a flash, and has only 1 review (Now 2 because of me)????
voted 5
really cool song. Its out there, but a good out there.
Voted 5
Cool track! It's subtle, but good! Nice job with this.
Again, thanks for helping keeping the ratings up! hah
Voted 5
Really cool song! I haven't heard many of your other ones...but so far this one is really good!
good job
Sweet! thanks for keeping the rating up! This is some of my newer stuff I will upload whenever possible, thanks man!
VOTED 5
hahahh what the fuck? This was great! HAHA I haven't had a good random laugh like that in while. Nice.
Thats all i could of ever hoped for
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The melody seems a little familiar. Where's that from!?
Good job though. Nice track.
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