voted 4
This isn't too bad.
The melody was great, I'm really liking it.
The percussion on the other hand wasn't good at all. You need to find a different kick, the one you have is way too weak.
The overall song is pretty good, a little short. I think you could have gone much further with this.
Overall decent tune. Keep up the good work.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "Digital Abuse"