voted 5
Everything I want in a trance song, and more!
This sounds so professional it's un-friken-believable. From the percussion, to the leads, to the saw pads. Just blown away.
I especially loved that build up you had around 2:00. Fantastic work on that. Although what it built up into wasn't as epic as it sounded like it was going to be.
Amazing job none the less! I can't wait to hear more out of you!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "Breathe"
Thank-you for the high rating and the kind words. Yes "epic" might not be the right phrase for it, but it was very late last night when I uploaded this so I was just blurting out words a little. XD
I'll have a listen to your track now.
Thanks again.
~BenA.
voted 5
wow very cute song! Not a bad thing in this case, it reminds me of summer! So thats a plus!
The overall composition of this song was great. From the vocals to the leads to the percussion, everything. Great work with that.
There were a couple parts here and there that I wasn't too fond of. Before the VOX "That will conclude this evenings..." I didn't like the sound you had going on there. WAY too much going on. Also there were a couple times where the volume was a little high and my speakers squeaked.
Other than that I loved it. Amazing work!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "Breathe"
Thanks Pinke, I really appreciate it. It does have a bit of summery feel now that I think about it.. It was made during summer after all :P The giant ass buildup before "That will conclude this evenings entertainment" was a bit much but I guess that's how I wanted it to be done ^^
voted 4
Pretty good song. Sounds more trance-y than anything.
I liked that melody you had. Very interesting and kept me listening. The percussion was so-so. I feel as though it could have been a little better and a little more crisp. It sounded kind of like it was muffled.
Also the overall quality of the song wasn't all that great. It kind of sounded like you were recording through a microphone. Fix that and this song will be really good!
The overall song was pretty good, a few things here an there. But still good!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "Breathe"
lol it was recorded through the windows recorder. I'm using a demo version of Ejay techno 5. I can't export with the software or save, so i make all my stuff in a couple hours, then I record it through the speaker line instead of the mic. Its better then mic recording but yes it is far from hd sound! Glad you liked it though
voted 5
I love the original, and I LOVE the game. This brought back great memories.
thanks for that.
The guitar, was OK. Not amazing, but not bad.
The drums were great! I liked them Nice work.
The overall song is great. I keep listening and listening. I love it.
Keep it up!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
Too bad my only guitar options are FL Slayer lol.
voted 4
Wow pretty impressive song. Although I feel like there are two conflicting genres here. DnB and Techno. Both seem want to be heard, badly. The drums tell me, lets do some Dnb, and the lead tells me lets go techno! ha
Although they are conflicting, it didn't sound too bad. I liked it.
I do, however, feel as if the percussion could have been louder. Especially in the parts where you have the 4/4 kick.
Overall pretty good song. Keep it up!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Be sure to check out my latest track "Breathe"
now tat you mention it i hear that too. soo maybe if i used a different bass sound raised the kick with an equalizer then it wouldnt sound like that anymore. i just thought that the faster moving catchy melody would prevail over the bass in people's ears, and for the most part it does, but in some parts it doesnt. ill look into it for my next song.
voted 5
Aw man man, you would have gotten 10 stars outta me if your kick was harder! It was WAY too weak for the melody. Next time, layer your kicks so they're harder, as well as add a ride on top of that. It gives the kick some ambiance as well as some body.
The song itself was pretty good. I quite liked it. Although I feel as though there was a lot of 'emptiness' to this song. You should throw a pad or two in there, just to add some body to the song.
The snare build ups were great. I really liked them.
The vocals were a little over used. I think the song could do well without.
Other than that I really enjoyed this song. Keep it up.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Be sure to check out my latest track "Breathe"
erh? really the kick was to low? dude, i lowered it because it was WAY to loud, sure your headphones maybe just low on bass or something?`cause im listening to it right now and im feelin the kick pretty damn hard, but that ride thing was pretty smart, ill do that for next ;-)
And ill check out your latest song ofc ;-)
voted 5
Decent tune. It has a trance feel, but the kick gives me a techno feel. I think you should make the kick a little less punchy. The hi hats also gave the song that techno feel.
Other than that I liked the melody it was something you would easily hear in a trance song.
I think that you should have some pads come in for the intro, and slowly have the rest of the song fade in. It would add some dynamics to this.
Overall pretty good.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Be sure to check out my latest track "Breathe"
Thanks! Yeah I have listened to a lot of your stuff, seems pretty good to me. I have also been working on a lot of new songs, and sorta progressed a bit from this XD. I just listened to this again now, and I can see how simple it sounds.
voted 5
What the hell?!
This song is amazing. Midnight was a great title choice. This song really reminded me of somewhere dark and scary. That synth is what gave it that eerie feeling and those church bells gave it that dark feeling.
Amazing work as usual dude.
Keep it up!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
wooooo thanks man
voted 4
OK. There are some changes here. Not any incredibly noticeable ones. Although the song is good, I feel like you could have done a lot more.
The piano is what I like most about this song. You could make it into its own song, without the intro to it. I think it would be pretty good.
Other than that, I think you should stop messing around with this song and work on a new one.
I don't want to seem harsh, I'm trying to help you. If you keep working on the same song over and over, you're going to come accustom to making music the same way, and possibly not progress as a musician.
Overall nice work. I would like to see more out of you though.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
Alright, i'll take that advice and leave this song as it is.
i wont be able to make anything for the next 2 weeks though, i'll be gone.
voted 5
Oh wow. You made this for his birthday? I wonder what his wedding is going to be like. haha
The song was very catchy. I honestly don't know what to think about the intro. It seems like a DJ was mixing from one song to yours. It's different. I honestly don't know what to think of it.
The song itself was amazing. It had everything I look for in a song. From the great bass, to the panning, to the horns, everything. Amazing work. I love this.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
It was actually for a girl, but yeah :P
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